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dingusjr
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0 posted 2007-06-26 01:54 PM




They reach out from the grocery aisle
in gaunt starvation,
like concentration camp victims
shuffling toward the crematorium.

These are Hollywood stars,
teaching little girls how they should look.
They stare out at us from the tabloids,
bones protruding in all directions.

Next week they will all have new boyfriends,
and feel better about themselves.


© Copyright 2007 Larry W. Allen - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2007-06-26 04:08 PM


Nice...James
Robert Jordan
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2 posted 2007-06-26 04:53 PM


Dingusjr,

Not bad, I got a kick out of it.  We can only hope they will feel better about themselves next paycheck.

Bobby

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3 posted 2007-06-26 06:29 PM


if that isn't what men like, then why on earth do those women do that? they look so sickly...like if you touch them, they will break. It's sad.
passing shadows
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4 posted 2007-06-26 06:55 PM


personally I don't care to know what's going on in the lives of the rich and famous LOL

makes me depressed

good write here

aziza
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5 posted 2007-06-27 03:43 AM


Good poem - the message is important

and I think they do it because the public pays attention.

A

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