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Forever in Love
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since 2007-05-31
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0 posted 2007-06-25 11:53 PM



Confused more than ever
answers everchanging
peace of mind out the door
wishing on your prescense
heart is crying out for you
tears of seperated lovers
mind is always thinking
hoping all is right
worried on health and emotions
for you i hug the air tonight
wishing you could replace it
for you i kiss a picture
and pray for you to be looked after
for you i snuggle between the pillows
closing my eyes imagining your arms
for you tonight i love you and forever
for in my mind your with me even when your gone
*** again dedicated to my hubby.. i thought he was coming home from the army basic training due to medical problems but they decided to keep him...but no matter where he is he is still in my heart**

© Copyright 2007 Forever in Love - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-06-26 12:21 PM


just like your pen name. always romantic and emotional. Good writing.

enjoyed.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2007-06-26 06:49 AM


And a blessed man to be loved...James
Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2007-06-26 10:22 AM


"for you i hug the air tonight"
That airspace will eventually be within his reach.

lilibeelee
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4 posted 2007-06-26 10:23 AM


way cute
passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2007-06-26 07:56 PM


sorry for the disappointment

hang in there

ladylisa
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since 2007-04-29
Posts 342
Florida USA
6 posted 2007-06-28 02:42 PM


Your Husband is a very lucky man.  Never lose what you have, very few ever experience this feeling.  
Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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7 posted 2007-06-28 03:07 PM


Home is indeed where the heart is, and I am sure he knows he is home every time you write for him.  Nicely done.  
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
8 posted 2007-06-28 03:13 PM


Your love for him is so strong that it is almost palpable! Will you be sending this adoring ~ and adorable! ~ poem to your hubby?
It would be a marvelous reminder that the home fires are still burning!

May the two of you enjoy a glorious conflagration of passion when he returns home!


EA

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