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Open Poetry #40
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Tomer
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0 posted 2007-06-25 09:08 PM


At night I leave my
Shoes undone so my
Feet can feel the run
Of the wind trading gasps
With the Southern bird.

I jumped in-between
The hills,
Draping my hands
To cloth the green
Molds of each hill
That transcends the last.

When my feet run,
It’s as if my hand
Is my bargaining chip,
To a land so quiet,
My body hums
With numbness.

A numbing,
As if my head
Could be sitting
Next to me,

Alongside the Southern bird.
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1 posted 2007-06-25 09:14 PM

I am loving your poems!
Tomer
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2 posted 2007-06-25 10:37 PM


Thanks passing, means a lot coming from you...happy your enjoying them.

Tomer
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Gaia
3 posted 2007-06-26 12:27 PM

"feel the run
Of the wind trading gasps"
oh, my feet felt this line
and smiled
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4 posted 2007-06-26 06:20 PM

enjoyed this very much
Drauntz
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5 posted 2007-06-26 06:45 PM

beautiful and imaginative.

enjoyed
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