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Open Poetry #40

What You're Seeing

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

0 posted 2007-06-24 03:33 PM

Howard was numb, not dumb

she wasn't a sweet girl to some

but to him she added up the sum

      of all his Auto Zone parts

but still, his car wouldn't start

not without her heart into it, pumping her compassionate fluid through his veins

now, just as soon as her forgiveness reaches his brains

            ah .... ignition

                                                            love,

                                                            rick's wrecker service

[This message has been edited by howardtsu (06-24-2007 04:05 PM).]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2007-06-24 04:14 PM

enjoyed...James

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-06-24 05:20 PM

beautiful. again.

enjoyed

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

3 posted 2007-06-25 12:56 PM

thanks guys

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

4 posted 2007-06-25 12:57 PM

thanks guys

howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

5 posted 2007-06-25 12:59 PM

thanks guys

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