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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 06-24-2007 05:45 AM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce


Hello
Iím still here
Loving you
And you
Are there
Aloof as always
Coming closer
Moving farther
Giving hope
Taking it back
I go with the flow
Ebbs and tides
But sometime soon
Iíll set myself
Free from you
And then
Maybe I'll know
The meaning of
Me...



Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........
© Copyright 2007 Roniece Dawson-Bruce - All Rights Reserved
Rick
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1 posted 06-24-2007 06:33 AM       View Profile for Rick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rick's Home Page   View IP for Rick

Roniece, when you find the meaning, please let me know my friend, I have been searching over the passed few years, the answer is becoming clearer, but still the years are marching on. Don't want to wait till the end. Enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing.

Rick
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 06-24-2007 06:38 AM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

thank you Rick... when it comes to me, I'll let you know I value your comments my friend  RDB x

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light


3 posted 06-24-2007 08:43 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Hey, it's good to see your smiling face again ~ and read your wonderful poetry!

"Giving hope
Taking it back"

~ Ouch! I've been there and it hurts like hades! But not any more! I found "Me" and may you never lose sight of "You"!

Loving hug,

Linda
Drauntz
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4 posted 06-24-2007 11:20 AM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

Beautiful and beautiful.

Good day to you, dear lady!!

enjoyed your poem and quite philosophical.

Sydney... the most beautiful city in the world.
vandana
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5 posted 06-24-2007 11:35 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

good read
JL
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6 posted 06-24-2007 02:11 PM       View Profile for JL   Email JL   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JL

"I go with the flow
Ebbs and tides
But sometime soon
Iíll set myself
Free"

Excellent write.
I can relate to this verse.

JL


What I used to do with one hand tied behind my back now requires every muscle in my body, cohesively.
~JL

passing shadows
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7 posted 06-24-2007 04:58 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

I wish I had some great wisdom to share here but I'm in the same boat myself

beautiful poem!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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8 posted 06-24-2007 07:24 PM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

thank you for your comments... I haven't written anything for ages and then suddenly not one but two poems came from my heart

Drauntz... yes, Sydney is indeed a very beautiful city to live in ... though we are freezing here at the moment - ok, I'm exaggerating but 15 degrees C is pretty cold for us here!! bbbrrrrrr!!! I hate Winter!!   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

aziza
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9 posted 06-24-2007 09:10 PM       View Profile for aziza   Email aziza   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for aziza

Roniece

I am so happy to be reading your poetry.  This is sadly lovely.  You are a lovely woman - I see that in every word you write.

Alison
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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10 posted 06-24-2007 09:52 PM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

Thank you Alison, that was a lovely thing to say   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Kit McCallum
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11 posted 06-25-2007 06:31 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

I understand this all too well, RDB ... sometimes we truly do have to give ourselves the opportunity to move on in order to find ourselves. Not an easy path sometimes ... but I can attest that it is a rewarding one. Much enjoyed this.

Best wishes,
/Kit
Paul Wilson
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Between Fantasy and Reality


12 posted 06-25-2007 02:10 PM       View Profile for Paul Wilson   Email Paul Wilson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paul Wilson

Roniece...Throughly enjoyed. Tender and touching...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Midnitesun
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13 posted 06-25-2007 04:34 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

Hello, lady! May your warmest smile be reflected in the eyes of someone very special, who will see and feel the depth of your beauty and grace.
secondhanddreampoet
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14 posted 06-25-2007 08:14 PM       View Profile for secondhanddreampoet   Email secondhanddreampoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secondhanddreampoet

finely emotive 'write'

serious applause!!
SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown


15 posted 06-25-2007 11:05 PM       View Profile for SmartChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit SmartChick's Home Page   View IP for SmartChick

"Giving hope
Taking it back"

Roniece, I sure know how this feels. And, boy does it hurt. I lived with the lies for a long, long time. Finding myself, has not been easy. I do hope you are able to get free, real soon.

Your poem here really hits home. I sure wish we could talk.
JamesMichael
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16 posted 08-04-2007 03:57 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I've done this a few times...but wanted to be me and her...James
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