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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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Los Angeles California

0 posted 2007-06-24 01:12 AM



John, Ah dear john
A century is short
A millennium is long
Now you dance into aging song
But the music has quietly gone
Pick up the rhythm and broken beat
To make a soft serenade
You may happily waltz along  

You climb up the Mt.Mellow
Ouch,
Your smooth verses slide you down
Back to the life of green and young
And a loving spirit wandering around

You crystallize a savage life
When your diamond heart get drowned
In the dreaming lake of Rainbow Lyric
Blessed by bird chirps at the misty down
When sky is blue and moon pale brown.

Today, sir
Your wisdom is grown
And mind is strong
And shall happy and healthy
Forever to you belong.  

Sir, this is your birthday song,
I try to hum out with gentle tongue
John, ah, dear John,
All my best wishes shall come to town.

Happy birthday, Sir Huan Yi!!!

Wszystkiego Najlepszego!




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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2007-06-24 02:16 AM


how clever you are Drauntz!! and what a lovely tribute to John!  Happy Birthday John !!!     RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2007-06-24 07:34 AM


Nice...James
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
3 posted 2007-06-24 08:06 AM


happy birthday
lightkeeper
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since 2006-09-13
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pluto
4 posted 2007-06-24 08:11 AM


happy birthday
oceanvu2
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since 2007-02-24
Posts 1066
Santa Monica, California, USA
5 posted 2007-06-24 02:09 PM


Birthdays

Does one contemplate
the candles
as they burn toward
frosting,

Or does one
merely blow them
out?

Have a blowout on me!  Well, OK, a serene blowout.  

Best, Jim


[This message has been edited by oceanvu2 (06-24-2007 03:42 PM).]

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
6 posted 2007-06-24 03:13 PM


.

Thank you all

John

.


On the way
One Red Admiral
Flutters by


.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
7 posted 2007-06-24 04:49 PM


this is a wonderful poem!

Yes, Happy Birthday to a great guy!


Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
8 posted 2007-06-24 04:53 PM


Happy Birthday to you, sir!!

and don't forget to solute the Red Admiral.


ease, please!        


Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
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Ontario, Canada
9 posted 2007-06-25 06:10 AM


What a great tribute, Drauntz!

Happy Birthdy Huan Yi!

Best wishes to you both,
/Kit

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