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Forever in Love
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since 2007-05-31
Posts 24


0 posted 2007-06-23 10:20 PM



Today it hits me again
miserable, gut wrenching feeling
not knowing what to expect
hoping, wishing, praying
fearing, crying, shaking
missing you, just wishing you were here
waiting, waiting, hoping for a call
waiting, waiting, please say your coming home
waiting, waiting, its killing me inside
to hear you voice, i wish, still waiting
loving you, loving you, my one true love
loving you, loving you, you are the one im dreaming of
loving you, loving you, your kiss i long await
till you come home to me
loving you, missing you, i wait....

** this is to my hubby.. he's in basic training in the army.. he suppose to be coming home because he's having medical problems..just waiting till i know when he'll be home again**

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2007-06-23 10:38 PM


Hope it all works out good for you and your husband...James
MindBodySoul
Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196
NJ
2 posted 2007-06-23 10:57 PM


Wow... that is a deep thought!  I hope your
Hubby comes home soon.... so that your wait is no longer a torment!!!  

Good Luck my fellow poet!

Jen--->MindBodySoul

MarkG
Junior Member
since 2007-06-21
Posts 48
California USA
3 posted 2007-06-23 11:41 PM


bleeding emotion on to the page...beautiful & sad & true...poetry in its purest form
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