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Open Poetry #40

'Looking-glass' Lake

secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2007-06-22 10:15 PM

‘Looking-glass’ Lake

The final sunburst...
over 'sawtooth' mountains
paints a twilight rainbow
through the deep-azurine sky
of startled clouds and mist,
slipping down slopes
in snow-kissed wonder
to the fine-mirrored symmetry
of ‘looking-glass’ lake.

~

[This message has been edited by secondhanddreampoet (06-23-2007 07:57 AM).]

SEA

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with you

1 posted 2007-06-22 10:22 PM

OH! I love this

how beautiful Bruce

passing shadows
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displaced

2 posted 2007-06-23 11:54 AM

I can close my eyes and see it now

beautiful work Bruce

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

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On A Journey To The Unknown

3 posted 2007-06-23 11:58 AM

This is just beautiful! I saw a big rainbow up in the sky just this past Thursday evening.

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27

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4 posted 2007-06-23 12:04 PM

This is awesome!!!I'm going back for another read!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

Robert Jordan
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since 2007-02-07

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Philadelphia Pa USA

5 posted 2007-06-23 01:21 PM

Secondhanddreampoet,

Not too bad, just kind of short.

Eagle's Mere used to get that way sometimes.

Bobby

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

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Michigan, USA

6 posted 2007-06-24 03:04 PM

The soul of the lake was evident in your rendering here. A beautiful view you have shared with us.

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

7 posted 2007-06-24 05:21 PM

beautiful again. and again.

fine write as you always do

ArtSolstice
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since 2007-03-18

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8 posted 2007-06-24 06:11 PM

Transcendent ... compelling.

Japanese women have many ways of expressing wonder by subtle variations in the way the word, "Ahhh" is pronounced. For example, one says "Ahhh" differently upon viewing a beautiful sunset than the way it might be said upon seeing a waterfall, a lovely painting, gentle rain, ducklings or a dragonfly. This poem encompasses myriad Ahhhs...

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