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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2007-06-22 05:46 PM

Foolish
this adoration
of your mouth
and the way the corners crinkle
rather than curve when your thoughts
are deviant….

Absurd
this worship
to the feel of your lips
and the way I find them
essential
to my existence

Ludicrous
this devotion
to how no other’s shiver me
like yours
and ohh the desperate desire

…..for just one more kiss

~SEA~

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2007-06-22 05:59 PM

must be the feather in my hat? (grin), enjoyed this ms suesea

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2007-06-22 06:06 PM

count on it, the feather in the hat always does the trick....

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2007-06-22 06:10 PM

now this is a desire, I definately understand SueSue....

but then, you already knew that, yes?

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2007-06-22 06:15 PM

Fo sho Donna

thanks

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

5 posted 2007-06-22 06:22 PM

fine 'write' and superb (leading) graphic image as well!

serious applause!!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2007-06-22 06:22 PM

gal, you crack me up!!

fo sho indeed....Corona and lime, anyone???

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2007-06-22 08:32 PM

nothing like nice straight white teeth and dimples

makes me think of a few mouths I've had the pleasure of knowing in my lifetime

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2007-06-22 08:36 PM

I am so enjoying how your writing

has grown.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2007-06-23 10:31 AM

oh yes Dixie, know what you mean

thank you
and thank you Karilea, that means more to me than you could know

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

10 posted 2007-06-23 05:54 PM

Read this and my first thought was "WOW!"...

going to leave it at that ... because it covers it so perfectly...

Wow!

jwesley

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

11 posted 2007-06-23 06:38 PM

Wow...this is soooo wonderful & strong ..yet, romantic.

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

12 posted 2007-06-24 12:43 PM

Just a lovely passionate write Sea, very much enjoyed, the kiss of desire, from lips to the fire, from touch all so rare, to love everywhere. Have a wonderful day.

Rick

Jezzika
Member

since 2005-01-05

Posts 154
work

13 posted 2007-06-25 12:02 PM

This was so awesome and the picture went perfectly with the poem!!
I really enjoyed it..

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