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Jenna Member
since 2007-03-20
Posts 180 |
I miss you I say I miss the way I used to be how loving you was free and easy and nothing held me back,. I miss the way I used to love you like there were no tomorrows how I wish I could get those days back and remove the wall around my heart. I miss you you said to me I miss the way you loved me and the way we used to talk the way we were connected and together we made one A simple phrase of "I miss you" Two meanings coming from two hearts formulated by a million thoughts which are left unsaid. One heartache and a lifetime to put right what we got wrong I miss you. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh this aches..at least for me it sure does... nicely done.  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I'm missing someone too...James |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
I miss the romantic heart...but have found one! thank you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
loved that last verse especially! beautiful |
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lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
good write |
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