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FNG
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0 posted 2007-06-22 12:05 PM


Nothing delights more,
when a rainbow came in view.
Can I trace where it starts and touch the end?

Im sure the colours would taint my heart,
giving me a 'lift' and 'high' like none.

Nothing delights more,
when a moon stand by a star,
nothing else,
nothing on par.

Like friends accompany each other,
in the dark night sky.
Seems lonely,
yet a tinge of sweetness,
encompass the two.

Wonder what they saying,
sweet nothings or sigh of resignation.

Nothing delights more,
to realise I'm not alone,
there's these quiet friends,
ever wishing I would take note.

© Copyright 2007 Danielle Tan - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-06-22 12:30 PM


"Nothing delights more,
to realise I'm not alone,"

no doubt!

enjoyed this

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2 posted 2007-06-22 02:25 PM


The sun, the moon, and the stars do make delightful friends!

No one is ever truly alone!

A very sweet write.

Love & Sun/Moon/Star Light,

EA

FNG
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3 posted 2007-06-26 08:46 AM


thanks for grazing through, my friends.
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4 posted 2007-06-26 08:28 PM


very touching

glad I didn't miss this one

Gifted
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5 posted 2007-06-26 08:52 PM


Yeah, you'll always have friends like the sun, stars, and the moon but there will always have clouds that cover up and lie to you.  So look out.  Also, you need to double check your spelling.  Nice work!
FNG
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6 posted 2007-06-29 11:57 AM


Hi gifted, thanks for the reminder ooppss! lolx
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7 posted 2007-06-30 09:59 PM


Much enjoyed, keep given us more delightful poems.
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8 posted 2007-06-30 11:26 PM


You're welcome FNG.

Peace. Love. Forgiveness.
  Blessings and Guidance

FNG
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9 posted 2007-07-01 06:04 AM


I've tried to edit but was forbidded. Hm, maybe next time I will edit earlier...
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