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A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

0 posted 2007-06-22 07:33 AM

Lies Of A Loss

Going away,
I take one last look behind,
But I can't believe those precious days
Were never more than lies.
I'm locking all,
Burying my memories inside,
Maybe I've become so heartless,
But I'm leaving love behind.
I'm leaving you alone -
Figure out your lonesome life,
Answer all the questions yourself,
But don't drown in your lies.
Draw the dots above
All your letters "i" and live,
But you'll never know love
If only for love you can't forgive.
Swallow your last words -
I'm not interested in them;
In front of you is loneliness,
But you will blame yourself.
Candles are going out -
With them trust, devotion fade...
On your side were they illusions?
How could a heart pretend?
At the edge of hope
Watch my recent dreams come by,
I feel so empty and lonely -
Wonder if those dreams were mine.
Everything that's left
Is my life, inside it burns,
It's the greatest will to live
No matter how my road turns.
I'm still thankful for that flame,
I'll remember you for it,
I'll remember you for lies you told me
And then I believed...
Throwing to your face
My last hope, I leave...

paullallady
Member

since 2007-04-03

Posts 262
Michigan

1 posted 2007-06-24 09:16 AM

How painful it is when the one we love hurts us. This is a very sad piece. good job.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2007-06-24 06:12 PM

I can sure relate to this

A Beautiful Disaster
Member

since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

3 posted 2007-06-25 09:49 AM

Thanks, people!

lilibeelee
Member

since 2001-07-12

Posts 143

4 posted 2007-06-26 10:26 AM

I feel this one. I like it. good job.

Dominique-Simone
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since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

5 posted 2007-07-02 07:39 PM

We all been there and will soon visit again. Remember to keep loving, after all it is one the greatest gifts we can ever give or receive.

A Beautiful Disaster
Member

since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

6 posted 2007-07-07 12:10 PM

Yes, I have to agree with that.
To keep loving is the most important thing, and love always remains the greatest inspiration.

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