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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2007-06-22 06:37 AM


writing pigeons on statues
with my eyes closed in gloves
just for the decoration
of black on white or versa verses

there is no god in my pen
or even in my room less mind
when the percussion moves me
to press sounds to stone

and outline the echoes on walls
as a painter with convulsions
enjoying the accidental spills
but never getting any on him

until the morning after allows
dry paint to be wet again
like second hand loving
from outside your/her windows

then the poetry is just your breathing


____________

daark


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1 posted 2007-06-22 08:18 AM



Your quiet persuasion, er, persistence, is lovely...


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2 posted 2007-06-22 08:55 AM


"and outline the echoes on walls
as a painter with convulsions"

I liked that description

enjoyed the read mister

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3 posted 2007-06-22 10:22 AM


thanks for the trip
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4 posted 2007-06-22 04:44 PM


"then the poetry is just your breathing"

that is so beautiful...just wanted to say that

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5 posted 2007-06-22 04:57 PM


"then the poetry is just your breathing"

and your poetry breathes. You bring it to life..

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2007-06-22 06:03 PM


ms sun, thanks my friend for the touch

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ms suesea, thanks to you twice as much as you can imagine

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shirtless, thanks for the ride along on this one

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donna, thank you for wearing my words with your eyes

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7 posted 2007-06-22 08:33 PM


ooooooooooooo...nice

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8 posted 2007-06-22 10:19 PM


until the morning after allows
dry paint to be wet again
like second hand loving
from outside your/her windows

then the poetry is just your breathing

---

This is incredible.
and beautiful

Enjoyed muchly,
A

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2007-06-23 07:18 AM


ms dixie, thanks babe!!


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lil A, you bless me often with your eyes
thank you much

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10 posted 2007-06-23 07:22 AM


Breathing your words in, like the scent of a very fine poetic cigar.

contemplative and pleasing to the senses D.

love,
reg

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2007-06-23 10:59 AM


regal one, I'd smoke one with you anytime, thanks babe..
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12 posted 2007-06-23 07:18 PM


~smiles~
Dark Stranger
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13 posted 2007-06-23 08:08 PM


ms Kateyezz...now that is a sexy smile, thanks ms
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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14 posted 2007-06-24 02:07 AM


Mr Daark... I'm very glad you are back writing for us... your words always smile me!  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Dark Stranger
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15 posted 2007-06-24 08:01 AM


ms RB, thank you for coming by and reading ...I appreciate you ms
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16 posted 2007-06-26 10:20 AM


i like this
Dark Stranger
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17 posted 2007-06-27 06:35 AM


lilibee....thank you so much
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