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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2007-06-22 06:12 AM



He is the giver of words
that awaken senses
long forgotten,
to make the meek
fill with sensuality,
and the brazen
turn shy.
He is the giver of words
lighting the day .....
lighting the way...

A special touch
of thought, of heart
teaching life lessons
abundant in his wisdom..
through his eyes seen
the world
in dawn of new day....

each day
better
for the gift he gives.....
from the twinkle eye smile
to sensuous style,
mixed with soul warmth
and the caring of
eternal friendships....
always true to himself....
his friends.......

teacher
of heart words,
through his minds view....

teacher
of
life,
visiting through his words,
a never ending adventure
of journeys into the
lessons of life.

He is sweetness wrapped
in poetic sensuality,

He is a giver of words

  and yet, much more......

     He is

              friend.

{revised 6-22-07}


No more hangin' on to the past
No more filling up my tomorrows
With yesterday's sorrows
No more lookin' over my shoulder {T.Tritt}

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1 posted 2007-06-22 04:30 PM


"He is sweetness wrapped
in poetic sensuality,

He is a giver of words

  and yet, much more......

     He is

              friend."

most definately, he is
awww, Donna, I love this


JamesMichael
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2 posted 2007-06-22 05:08 PM


Silky...James
Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2007-06-22 06:00 PM


ms donna, he would be blessed by this...and your gentle spirit, enjoyed it
passing shadows
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4 posted 2007-06-22 08:19 PM


nicely done
rwood
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5 posted 2007-06-29 06:03 AM



"teacher
of heart words,"

we need more of those. millions!

what a wonderful tribute, Somy.


adagio
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6 posted 2007-06-29 02:45 PM


Hey Hey ,Wow Wow!
wonderfull piece
enjoyed
adagio

The Lady
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7 posted 2007-07-01 01:03 AM



beautiful
gentle Donna


aziza
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8 posted 2007-07-01 06:23 PM


Donna (may I call you that?) --

Your poems just settle something inside me as I read.  It's like ... you know when water laps against a dock? It's kind of like that.   Your words touch my heart and I leave with a smile.

Alison

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9 posted 2007-07-01 06:32 PM


You are all smile makers, and givers of words and I thank you for leaving such kind words here.  

D...as I am also blessed by his his spirit.

And yes, Aziza, you may call me Donna, if you so chose.    


thanks and peace to all.  



No more hangin' on to the past
No more filling up my tomorrows
With yesterday's sorrows
No more lookin' over my shoulder {T.Tritt}

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (07-01-2007 09:14 PM).]

Martie
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10 posted 2007-07-01 08:46 PM


Donna ... I'm sure that I know who you mean...and it is so true what you wrote so beautifully.  
Gentle Spirit
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11 posted 2007-07-01 09:17 PM


Aww Martie, that means alot to me, thank you sweet lil' friend of mine.  


No more hangin' on to the past
No more filling up my tomorrows
With yesterday's sorrows
No more lookin' over my shoulder {T.Tritt}

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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12 posted 2007-07-02 04:35 AM


Donna... for some reason when I was reading this, the name Mr Daark came to mind... I find him to be a 'giver of words' much like yourself sweet friend ... very much enjoyed..
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Gentle Spirit
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13 posted 2007-07-02 02:02 PM


RDB, thank you so much for stopping by.
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