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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
tale progressed interpreted hidden in layers of paint scraped to reveal underlying strata layers pealed secrets crept up front first a female hand her shale was brittle to the hard tissue body to match came forward from a sea of men servants claimed their place around long tables driving nail after nail into her coffin how the female could be underneath with no introductions needed she had her place preserved one of those boxes closed not to reopen.. until the secret surfaced from the earths depths as though the soil shouts motherhood rose petals open and her station is completed. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Wow, this was extremely high definition brutal honesty...about the stains of gossip, and how words can murder and sensor someone's life... or at least, that is what I've taken from this write... excellent... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Layers and still more layers of interpretation here... something I would love to hear discussed around a table filled with poets who enjoy such... well done, Martin. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"tale progressed interpreted hidden in layers of paint scraped to reveal underlying strata layers pealed secrets crept up front" ~ and that is what I always enjoy about your writing. You do exactly that and the unfolding of your tales are like the petals of a lotus blossom opening up.  So good to see you posting again!  EA |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
thaks all for your comments  |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
It's all so final isn't it...or is it. I really like this one. Take care, JulieAnn ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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