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howardtsu
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0 posted 2007-06-21 01:40 PM


    have you ever heard of a beautiful fire?

she's a little less dangerous than a beautiful liar

      except her fire is a lot harder to control

both delicious holds can be unbreakable

i told Beyonce and Shakira about her and they agreed that true love is usually unmistakable

why her effect on me is unshakeable

                     they couldn't say



                                                                         love,

                                                                         howard



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Drauntz
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1 posted 2007-06-21 03:18 PM


beautiful little poem.  and true in life, i guess.

enjoyed

passing shadows
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2 posted 2007-06-21 08:38 PM


cute

howardtsu
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3 posted 2007-06-22 02:05 PM


thanks passing shadows  

thanks drauntz  

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