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passing shadows
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0 posted 2007-06-20 02:42 PM



Contemplate this moment.


Are you in need or are you free?
Are you warm enough and fed?
Do you have a way to feel and see
and a pillow which to lay your head?

Are you breathing well and living fine?
Are you helping others through?
Do you believe life has a grand design
and that God has a plan for you?

Do you have friends that you can call
when you're feeling blue and need to talk?
Do you accept that you will fall
when trying so hard to walk?

Do you wake in the morning and sleep at night
knowing everything will be okay?
Can you say 'It's all going to work out right'
and rejoice in having another day?

Do you end the evening with a smile
and know you've done your best?
Do you have shoes for tomorrow's mile?
Then you are truly blessed.

Contemplate this moment.


© Copyright 2007 Dixie Lee Bullington - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
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1 posted 2007-06-20 02:54 PM


dear Passing, beautiful poem. I can sense that you are happy now.

enjoyed and I did asked myself with your questions.

have a wonderful day, lady!!!

Honeybunch
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2 posted 2007-06-20 03:39 PM


Good one, Dixie!  Yes, we all have much to be grateful for at any given moment - may not be what we want but we're generally fine.
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2007-06-20 04:43 PM


Nice...Its good to acknowledge and appreciate your blessings...James
secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 2007-06-20 05:32 PM


fine, powerful 'write'!
[MANY 'important' questions asked...
  sadly, I must answer 'no' to far too many
   of them]...

serious applause!!

divine chaos
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5 posted 2007-06-20 07:24 PM


Dixie darlin .. I love this so much   Sometimes its hard to look past the bad and dwell on all the blessings we have instead, but when we do that .. the bad doesn't seem so terrible, does it?  *smiles*  beautiful!

Sheli

The Lady
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6 posted 2007-06-20 10:20 PM




Ah yes

Contemplate this moment
indeed Dixie...

miscellanea
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7 posted 2007-06-20 10:56 PM


Dixie,

   I'll Comtemplate this Moment again and again, as I'm going to take this to my library right away!  Nice thoughts, nice writing.  

   Enjoyed!  Have a good week and weekend!  

misce'

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8 posted 2007-06-21 12:04 PM


Those of us who can answer YES... Are beyond being millionaires. Good write Dixie, You Are Loved.
Martie
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9 posted 2007-06-21 02:18 PM


Dear Dixie

Do you end the evening with a smile
and know you've done your best?
Do you have shoes for tomorrow's mile?
Then you are truly blessed.

Contemplate this moment.

More and more as I get older.  This is uplifting, Dixie...

Paul Wilson
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10 posted 2007-06-21 04:53 PM


Dixie...I have to say you must have been inspired by a higher power to write this thoughtful masterpiece. Keep the faith. Well done dear lady...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Robert Jordan
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11 posted 2007-06-21 05:26 PM


Passing shadows,

The poem has good end rhymes.  That's very good.  I liked the idea too.

Bobby

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12 posted 2007-06-22 11:22 AM


This reminds me of the old saying, "count your blessings".  This is a wonderful reminder to just appreciate the blessings that we normally take for granted. wonderful piece of writing.
LeeJ
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13 posted 2007-06-22 11:29 AM


cream de la cream

I applaud you

this is one of the best of yours I've read, and so powerfully done...

excellent!!!!!!

HopeS
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14 posted 2007-06-22 11:34 AM


I have food in the cupboard a roof over my head , a pillow to rest my head , I should count my blessings  

Hope

FNG
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15 posted 2007-06-22 11:46 AM


Contentment....hope I could say yes to all these, trying
passing shadows
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16 posted 2007-06-22 01:23 PM


thank you each

I'm amazed at the replies


Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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17 posted 2007-06-24 02:36 AM


yes Dixie... I have shoes and I have my smile ready for the day ahead... this was lovely!!  thank you  RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Rick
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18 posted 2007-06-24 06:44 AM


Dear Dixie, if you could spread a little happiness and love, as well as a few friends on top, it could be me. This was truly a great write and one that I am sure everyone will enjoy and reply on. You do seem more at peace tonight my friend, hope it continues for you, be well and enjoy.

Rick

lightkeeper
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19 posted 2007-06-24 08:20 AM


When our "souls" are are feeling worn down.... we simply need a new pair of shoes

A lovely poem that makes you want to walk that extra mile

lightkeeper

passing shadows
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20 posted 2007-06-24 05:19 PM


thanks for the smiles

Angel4aKing
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21 posted 2007-06-25 08:49 PM


I don't know what took me so long to read this one!!! I have been contemplating myself alot lately!!! This is GOOD!!!!

My favorite part...

Do you have shoes for tomorrow's mile?
Then you are truly blessed


~~~kingsangel~~~

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