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September Light
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September Light |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. The sun sets Just above the low hills There are flights of birds Crossing the Western sky Crickets have already begun Their final nocturnal symphonies Among the weeds Holding books Against your breasts You talk on subjects Which have no relevance To anything learned in school And I couldn’t care less That I’m already late for class Immersed in the colors Of your eyes . |
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lacydee Member
since 2007-06-17
Posts 130Indiana |
awww..this is sooo pretty! I loved it. Dee as for me and my house, we will serve the Lord. |
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RogueandPoet Member
since 2007-06-04
Posts 126Oregon |
That was a great piece. Really liked it. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
absolute beautiful. too very soft. a heart can only hold it in dream. truly. a very soft song and very romantic....wow, very romantic, sir!!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 touching |
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