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droppinginsideout
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since 2006-08-04
Posts 54
TENN

0 posted 2007-06-20 04:34 AM


im the kind of guy who relies
on personality.
looks dont add up on me as
if i was a problem with no equality
too many people know me, ive
lived here all my life
i need to get away from everything
move away where im new to everything and just might
be able to start a new beginning
all in the hope that my
"messed up" reputation doesnt follow me,
proceed me, either way contadict me.
mess me up in anyway,
anyways movin on to the next page.

this man needs a new place
new surroundings who dont know his face.
people who cant know whats next on his mind,
a place where people can't calculate his "next time"
keep em guessin, keep em lost.
trust his own choices and his own thoughts.

In a sense i need the esteem
that ive heard i had when i was a teen
and im no quite sure where i went wrong.
with myself and what i did or didnt do all along.
Trapped down beneath some years of disappointment.
which led to loss of freinds, relationships ends, and the worst of unemployment.
Maybe its just me, maybe im too blind to see,
that the one behind the strings
im tied to isnt who it needs to be...
im outta here, sooner or later.
movin on to better things,
cant wait to start my life over

~Jamison~    "feeling sorrow for all the things u had to steal and borrow, bring back the dates we had b4 tomorrow"-red jumpsuit apparatus

© Copyright 2007 Jamison - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2007-06-20 05:15 AM


there is a certain feeling that comes with movin on

a new place...a new life

makes you feel like you are being reborn

good write

RogueandPoet
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since 2007-06-04
Posts 126
Oregon
2 posted 2007-06-20 12:19 PM


I enjoyed this read. Once upon a time I moved on.... best decision I ever made.
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