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Moonkist
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0 posted 06-19-2007 07:06 PM       View Profile for Moonkist   Email Moonkist   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Moonkist



Our Lives
Radically Different
Or so we thought
We found
It became
Quite Complimentary

Our hearts open
Truths emerge
Our friendships deepen
Exchanges occur

Souls find a rare meeting place to visit
Again and Again
We meet in that place
When we least expect it
And need it the most

Freedom Now

© Copyright 2007 Helen - All Rights Reserved
Topheth
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1 posted 06-19-2007 08:41 PM       View Profile for Topheth   Email Topheth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Topheth

This one touches me so....  Great write, nice read.
JamesMichael
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2 posted 06-20-2007 08:09 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Nice writing...James
secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 06-20-2007 05:36 PM       View Profile for secondhanddreampoet   Email secondhanddreampoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secondhanddreampoet

fine 'write'!

I especially loved:

"Souls find a rare meeting
  place to visit...
When we least expect it
And need it the most..."

Applause!!
passing shadows
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excellent!
Moonkist
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5 posted 06-21-2007 05:16 PM       View Profile for Moonkist   Email Moonkist   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Moonkist

Thank you all for your sweet replies.... This place definitely feels as one of those "meeting places"

Much love,
Moonkist

Freedom Now

JamesMichael
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6 posted 06-23-2007 05:51 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Revisit...James
Earth Angel
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What a precious piece of poetic penning!

I felt it in my heart and soul ~ which you appear to  have in abundance.

Loving hug,

EA
P.S. I was wondering if you meant "complementary" instead of "complimentary" in this instance.
Robert Jordan
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Moonkist,

The strange capitalization in this is rather off-putting.  I'd also suggest some appropriate punctuation.

Bobby
Klassy Lassy
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9 posted 07-14-2007 02:00 PM       View Profile for Klassy Lassy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Klassy Lassy

I love it when harmony happens...and it's never an accident.  It's always a treasure to know a friend, though, because they will often know you better in those first moments that otherS might in a hundred years.  ~ K
The Lady
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an excellent write Moonkist
Artic Wind
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enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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