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Canvas Surface Sonnet |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
I hope this is a sonnet. Second Attempt Sunshine lucid color spirits explode Inside divine beauty vocals mornings Open décor refresh liquid accords Human brilliance dissolve sensual touches. Gentle satin serene nature music Precise measure accent detent cadence Bosoms earthy meter amour affairs Rapture moment cascade vital compounds. Awards inside eyesight fortune resource Tactile palette express inward lifework Expert linen woven artist pictures Inscribe define writing vocal surfaces. Teachers export future embryo daydreams, Students travail sunRISE labor attempts. First attmpt Sunshine radiant colored spirits explode Inside divine beauty vocals mornings Open décor refreshed liquid harmony Human melody melting sensual touches. Gentle satin serene nature music Precise measured accent detent cadence Bosoms earthy meter amour affairs Rapture moment cascade vital compounds. Awards inside eyesight fortune resource Tactile palette express inward lifework Expert linen woven artist pictures Inscribe define writing vocal surfaces. Teachers export future embryo daydreams, Students travail sunRISE labor attempts. Note: Artmosphere’s dreamscape of painting your mind’s self expression unshackled. David L. Young 06/19/07© De-Terminated poet, somewhere in America not on company time [This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (06-20-2007 08:28 PM).] |
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Mr. Omniscient Member
since 2006-10-28
Posts 134 |
I like this. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
D.Lester Young Enjoyed the read, well done. |
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