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RogueandPoet
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0 posted 2007-06-19 04:30 PM


I wrote this poem this morning and yet
I'm still not sure what I think of it.

A Quiet Inner World

I’ve known some guys who seem
   to have a quiet inner world,
   not calm – more like a dead zone
   like a place cut off from light.

They’ve worked and done the minimum
   their duties have required,
   and then its seems they’ve just turned off
   or had no stomach for the fight.

These guys unnerve me – frighten me
   they are so happy in the dark,
   simplicity is one thing
   but to seek no more from life?

I’ve dug quite hard to find their souls
   I’ve questioned them at length
   they claim no interest in philosophy
   they have their work, a home, and wife.

I have no reason to dislike them,
   they’ve no evil I can sense –
   and yet they’re living breathing zombies
   with no purpose they can name.

Life is short and yet there’s much
   we can discover in our time,
   so many mysteries to solve
   and so much more to spark the flame.

I just can’t fathom such complacency –
   such utter disregard
   for I could not survive
   without my inner world in play.

And so I wonder if some trauma
   is behind their inner chill
   they are yet another mystery
   and for them I will pray.

© Copyright 2007 John Eyler - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-06-19 04:51 PM


In regard to why you are not quite sure
on why you are still thinking about this, it struck me here...


They’ve worked and done the minimum
   their duties have required,
   and then its seems they’ve just turned off
   or had no stomach for the fight.


When people do just the minimum...we are all left shrugging our shoulders, and picking up the load...

good thinking here...


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