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Open Poetry #40

Nothing But Myself

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2007-06-19 02:17 PM

Nothing But Myself

When I need reassurance
you give me silence.

When I need truth
you give me
fabrication
and lies.

When I need to trust
and believe you give
me no one to trust
and nothing to
believe in.

When I want you
and need you,
you give me
nothing but
myself.

JamesLee
19June
2007

VBallNut
Member

since 2003-02-12

Posts 60
Virginia, USA

1 posted 2007-06-19 02:36 PM

Wow do I know how you feel! Great write and I hope that things can be mended with this person. If not, sometimes we're better off without.

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

2 posted 2007-06-19 03:20 PM

beautiful complain sir, with a poem. Your interest is not her interest. that is what we are debating in the back yard.

enjoyed. as good as always

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2007-06-19 05:22 PM

Good write my friend! Put it well.

j.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2007-06-19 05:37 PM

James, it seems to me that getting yourself back ain't half bad! You are sweet, loving, and romantic!

You deserve better than what she appears to be able to give.

A touching write, Island Man.

Linda

Robert Jordan
Member

since 2007-02-07

Posts 392
Philadelphia Pa USA

5 posted 2007-06-19 05:42 PM

James,

Nice poem I like it. Nice shape too.

That's all we really need though, isn't it--just ourselves.

Bobby

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

6 posted 2007-06-22 11:42 AM

Talking about loneliness...nothing but myself.

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