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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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when morning melds our eyes and our fingers know the other's like samba's of rain mouths on the glass grass meadow drinking their fill of quiet then giving shimmering birth to the glove of river's surround for a worshiping drowning then we will gnash our lips with each other's teething pressing our breaths into entwine to combine hungry and survival a gourmet of galloping gazes broken long strokes bending then breaking into splinters of lovely as the pricking trees of our dawn irritate our cloud side satiation ___________ daark |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful visuals you've woven throughout here Dark. Such a silky and delicate flow to this piece. Lovely!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
delightfully delicious big daddy.. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"pressing our breaths into entwine" *sigh*  |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Yep to what the other ladies said - Just add my name to your long list of fans. Alison (that's with one 'l') |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
From dark to light... and back again.  Well done, as always, and always well come. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
"cloud side satiation." when you metaphor, you throw open all the doors and windows of sensual thought... "and our fingers know the other's like samba's of rain mouths on the glass grass meadow" and you don't forget to fragile what's strong, in between. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms kit, thank you for the blessing of your read ____________ ms donna, as always, thank you for the walk by _____________ ms suesea, you make me smile reading between the lines, thanks ____________ ms sun, thank you lady friend for being close ____________ ms one l az...thanks for being a special 1 ______________ regal one, a pleasure to feel your smile and know your nod, thanks lady |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"for a worshiping drowning" oh you know |
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Moonkist Member
since 2006-09-29
Posts 197Pennsylvania |
softly and sensually woven... left me wistful... such a gentle and comforting feeling comes the dawn for lovers, that you've created here.... *sigh* ~Moonkist Freedom Now |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
mmmm.... delightful! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, thank you ______________ ms moon, thank you for the read ______________ rb, thanks for the touch again |
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