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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2007-06-18 06:51 AM



painting the wings of dragons
leaves purple under the nails
that is only invisible
when they wing the mornings

but still I string my bow
the one of spaghetti wood
that curves like the shallow moon
around waterfall darkness

and you wear your autumn gown
backless and turned around
so the tattoo of your belly shows
not to mention the bosom treasury

your eyes don't touch my hands
as they reach under whispering
but you dance a willing dance
to keep wolves from noticing

how hollow sounds on full moon

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daark

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2007-06-18 07:35 AM



From my festival of sound
and music
to your music, filled
with


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with you
2 posted 2007-06-18 08:45 AM


"the one of spaghetti wood
that curves like the shallow moon
around waterfall darkness"

this is so pretty

aziza
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3 posted 2007-06-18 10:38 AM


Which part of this poem do I say I think is the most beautiful?  I think the entire piece is magical, sensuous, and it filled me with pleasure to read it.

Thank you for a morning treat.

A

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2007-06-19 06:28 AM


ms sun, thanks lady friend..


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ms suesea, humble thanks to you
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ms az, thank you for your eyes here

The Lady
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5 posted 2007-06-20 09:38 PM




stranger darlin'
I have heard

"how hollow sounds on full moon"

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2007-06-21 06:36 AM


hi ladyone, thanks for leanin in
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