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perfect stranger
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0 posted 2007-06-17 11:02 AM



for years gone by weve been in a muddle
i had a good man lots of kisses and cuddles
i dont know what happened we got in a rut

he had no job no money no life
on his computer it was like a wife
morning noon and through the night
he was talking to females with all his might

he had no time for me at all
he would go to the footy and have a ball
in he would come at three four or five
on the computer he would come alive

it got i couldnt be bothered
he was there all the time and i was smothered
no kissing no cuddling that was my fault

he got a job that was great
he did change he would make me wait
out with his pals he wanted to be free
not stuck in a rut with boring old me

my love for him is so strong
both of us have gone wrong
oh how i wish i could make him love me again
money in his pocket he said im now an old flame

weve been together for ten years oh ive shed so many tears
he told me he wants to be free
said he has no love for me

he sid he will stay until he gets a house
he said he cant stand me as i squeak like a mouse
oh how i wish i could show him my love
if i go near him he gives me a shove

i said to him is there someone else
he said theres nobody just go and get lost


said to him is there someone else
he said there is no one else just go and get lost

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1 posted 2007-06-17 11:22 AM


tell him to get out and don't look back!!!No one needs that kind of heart ache.
Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2007-06-17 11:30 AM


oh, how sad when we have someone right there in the same room with us, but yet not there at all. I can very much relate to this. Definately, it makes us feel lost.  Nicley done.
perfect stranger
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3 posted 2007-06-17 12:44 PM


sea,thanks for your comments,the ball is in his court when to go, but once he does i will be strong and get him out of my head.
perfect stranger
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4 posted 2007-06-17 12:48 PM


gentle spirit,what you said is right he is here in the room with me, but not here with me,were like strangers,thanks for your kind comments.
Patryck
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5 posted 2007-06-17 04:37 PM


u dont need him baby. he doesnt know what hes losing, and thats his mistake.
lacydee
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6 posted 2007-06-17 06:14 PM


It's so sad when you care so much and the feelings aren't returned. What do you do? I have been there, and it hurts, but there is life after love lost. I know, I have one now who loves me as much as I love him and it was worth all the pain and tears to get where I am now. Good luck sweetie. lacydee

as for me and my house, we will serve the Lord.

perfect stranger
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7 posted 2007-06-23 02:35 PM


patryck,thanks for your kind comment he will be moving out soon he has already moved some stuff out of the house .
perfect stranger
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8 posted 2007-06-23 02:38 PM


lacydee,it is so sad because at one time we must have really loved each other what happened to us wish, we could turn the clock back,thanks for your comment,much appreciated.
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