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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Composition Longs strands of music hung like ice cycles from low-slung cabin eaves Each note suspended in frosty dew berries carrying a song from the wind Haunting melodies echoed through tattered lace drifting from wood framed windows We danced silently upon hand-sewn quilts Fingers picked out the verses sung Creating harmony within our passionate duet --- Alison |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
can see this place ms az, and shadows playing by the windows, enjoyed |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Lovely composition, Alison! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
such a cozy feeling this gives  very much enjoyed |
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RogueandPoet Member
since 2007-06-04
Posts 126Oregon |
Wonderful imagery. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
This is wistful and preciously romantic too, the warmth of love contrasting with the cold words..thank you... Goldenrose. Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Thank you, wonderful readers of PiP. Alison |
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