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shirtless
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0 posted 2007-06-16 12:11 PM



THIS IS THE WAY I MISS YOU

some sort of caterpillar
essing upwards,
dragging its body
to a butterfly;

and even though
it's two weeks
before
we meet again,
already,
it stretches
its skin
like the fibers of a wing.

© Copyright 2007 Anthony Armstrong - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2007-06-16 03:07 AM


Anthony.... this is a nice way to miss someone... I hope the 2 weeks go quickly for you   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2007-06-16 03:51 AM


Most times, I really don't like an all caps screaming title--but?

when that title aches like this?

I just want to curl up in understanding...

mmmmrrrrrrrrrrrrrrmmmmmmphhhhhhh

*shrug*

It's the sound I made.


Paula Finn
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missouri
3 posted 2007-06-19 12:18 PM


Oh yeah...it does have that ache
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2007-06-19 01:14 PM


yes

that's it exactly



JamesMichael
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5 posted 2007-06-19 02:03 PM


Nice...James
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