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0 posted 2007-06-16 12:04 PM



when you lay beside me
the moment was an ocean
I could not see the shore

when you lay beside me
no heaven could attract me
no god could I adore

© Copyright 2007 Anthony Armstrong - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2007-06-16 12:08 PM


toooo romantic for a Friday night.

beautiful truly.

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2 posted 2007-06-16 12:22 PM


*sighs* beautiful and yeppers...wonderfully romantic!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2007-06-16 03:09 AM


"sighs" Anthony, this is wonderful! lucky lady!!   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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4 posted 2007-06-18 06:54 PM


Not one wasted word amoung them Romantic and beautiful at the same time
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5 posted 2007-06-19 03:47 AM


wow!
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