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Patryck
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since 2007-06-15
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0 posted 2007-06-15 10:27 PM


The image of your smile stays with me through the day

And even when I sleep, in my dreams won’t go away

And all I want from you, is for you to be a friend

That every moment were together, never I want to end

My heart breaks with yours, but is whole when yours is too

That’s why I’m never jealous, when I’m seeing him with you

I’ll never move on from you, because my love is true

That’s means I got your back, no matter what say or what you do

If you ever need a friend, to lean on when your down

I’m yours to be leaned on, because you’re the best friend I have found

I can act like your not that special, but oh, you really are

U light up my world, you are my shinning star

My best friend, that you are, whom I never want to part

But I know we never could, because you’ll always be my heart.



© Copyright 2007 Patryck - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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1 posted 2007-06-15 11:45 PM


so beautiful and moving. So beautiful  and touching. So soft a song of heart. Friend...the best kind.

enjoyed happily

Sunshine
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2 posted 2007-06-16 08:57 AM


Welcome to Passions, Patryck.  Please,
check your email for a Very Special Greeting!


aziza
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3 posted 2007-06-16 09:29 AM


Beautiful, Patryk.
You sound like a good man
and a true friend.

Welcome to PiP.

Alison

SmartChick
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4 posted 2007-06-16 11:54 AM


Welcome to Passions! This is such a beautiful poem of friendship.
Winter Butterfly
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5 posted 2007-06-16 12:16 PM


Truely heartfelt.

Welcome to PIP!

~Winter~

"I used to worry what people thought of me, then I broke through my cacoon"

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2007-06-16 10:43 PM


Patryck~

Welcome, Welcome, Welcome to PiP~

Best friends keep us grounded in the circle of love~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -   noles1@totcon.com

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 2007-06-17 05:32 AM


Patyrck... Welcome!! I loved this post of yours... I can't imagine life without my best friend either.... well said..

Be well
RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2007-06-17 06:16 AM


Me thinks you want more than a friendship...James
Kit McCallum
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9 posted 2007-06-17 10:04 AM


Beautiful sentiments to share with a friend Patryck ... Welcome to Passions!

Best wishes,
/Kit

lacydee
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Indiana
10 posted 2007-06-17 03:38 PM


awww...this is so sweet and filled with such love. lacydee
Kethry
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11 posted 2007-06-17 09:12 PM


very nice sentiment. Friends like that are hard to find. I hope you enjoy your time here.

a good commitee can decimate communication.

FNG
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12 posted 2007-06-18 05:50 AM


Wanting everything good for a friend...A great virtue.
roxy_rox
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since 2007-06-18
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NSW Austalia
13 posted 2007-06-18 06:18 AM


that's a great poem!!

A Romantic Heart
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14 posted 2007-06-18 11:10 AM


Welcome to PIP!

Nice poetry, hope you enjoy the family and friendship!

~ARh

RogueandPoet
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15 posted 2007-06-18 12:05 PM


Nice piece, I'm with James Micheal though - sounds like you want to ne more than friends.
Jenna
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16 posted 2007-06-18 12:35 PM


very heartfelt and packed with emotion
passing shadows
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17 posted 2007-06-18 06:46 PM


welcome to Passions!


garysgirl
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18 posted 2007-06-18 11:28 PM


This is so beautiful, Patryck. Look
forward to reading more of your work.

Also, welcome to PIP. I hope you enjoy
yourself here.
Hugs,
Ethel

Patryck
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since 2007-06-15
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19 posted 2007-06-19 11:52 AM


I wouldn't mind being this girl's boyfriend, but shes in a relationship and i'm perfectly happy just being her best friend. i've been her friend for a long time. thank you to everyone who replied.
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