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Triskaidekaphobia
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since 2003-02-05
Posts 251
In a state of disrepair...

0 posted 2007-06-15 10:02 PM



You really are annoying
when walking here and there.
All your petty little judgements
the rest find quite unfair.

Yes, you're very pretty
but then you clearly know.
It makes you unattractive
because it really shows.

Any man who takes another look
you label as perverse.
If you don't like them looking
then wear a longer skirt!

I've told you so a dozen times
and you say "I shouldn't have to"
While, fair enough, that's fine
but do you really have to whine?

When you see a guy with his shirt off
you say "My god, he's fine!"
and if I said you were perverted
you'd say "He doesn't mind"

You don't know seem to know
that you're hypocrisy defined
and it's quite a double standard
you've thoughtlessly refined

Hangovers are nature's way of preparing us for liver failure.

© Copyright 2007 LTEvans - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-06-15 11:48 PM


how interesting a poem. it is nice to judge a double standard girl...a good poem came out.

enjoyed

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2007-06-16 04:26 PM


Enjoyed...James
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