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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2007-06-15 05:47 AM


Cadilac Man

He was so clean,
holding onto his
American dream.
He liked to say,
"No foreign cars
for me, no siree."
And on the weekends
he'd crank up his
Cadilac Coupe DeVille
and head for the stills
in the hills of Tennessee.
Sometimes when he wanted
to be nice he'd take along
his cute little wife.
She was Japanese.

JamesLee
14June
2007






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Pilgrimage
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1 posted 2007-06-15 09:40 AM


Hah!  I love that.  But see, she's not a car, and that's what's important.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

passing shadows
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2 posted 2007-06-15 11:04 AM


you are quite a writer James

always make me smile


LeeJ
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3 posted 2007-06-15 11:27 AM


very cute

MIcountrygirl79
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4 posted 2007-06-15 12:54 PM


Very cute!  Definitely my smile for the day

Elizabeth

aziza
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5 posted 2007-06-15 02:41 PM


I like this, James.

Sometimes when he wanted
to be nice he'd take along
his cute little wife.


What a guy!

A

ladylisa
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6 posted 2007-06-16 04:43 PM


What a beautiful image.  Clean and crisp.  Yet another great piece of work.
A Romantic Heart
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7 posted 2007-06-16 04:46 PM


Enjoyed this James!
JL
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8 posted 2007-06-16 07:46 PM


Hummmmmmm....



JL

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~Thomas Jefferson


perfect stranger
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9 posted 2007-06-17 11:11 AM


this poem really made me smile give my love to your wife she must be very special
lacydee
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10 posted 2007-06-17 11:14 AM


this was great! I loved it. yep, no foreign cars for him, but now, a wife..that is an altogether different matter, right? LOL I loved it. lacydee
JamesMichael
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11 posted 2007-06-17 05:16 PM


Thank you Pilgrimage, passinsg shadows, Lee J, ML country, aziza, ladylisa, Romantic Heart, JL, perfect and lacydee for the nice responses...
This was not about me...I am single and drive a KIA and before that a Toyota...James

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