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A Buds's Smile
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A Buds's Smile |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite: A Buda’s Smile There is a time each day or night A part of me just takes to flight And I become a phantoms wile And be a Buda with a smile Surrounded by impressions spill The glories of a fancy will I make a Shangri-la for two A spirited I and ghost of you We fly about as butterflies Under an emeralds golden sky Drink a draught of forbidden tea With out a thought of what will be We dance and play upon a shore With blooms of flowers evermore We play the game of ecstasy With abandons intimacy And scoff at past’s reality A world away we cannot see |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now, I am trying to imagine an image of a little Budda-Sy... and if you sit still long enough, I will rub your belly for good luck!    |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Thank you dear I'd enjoy that.  |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You have no idea how much I enjoy your poetry. Thank you. A |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Just beautiful, Sy. Your poetry is always a pleasure to read. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you have a fantastical way of making your words sing and bounce  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
aziza, You have no Idea how much I enjoy your comments. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick, You are a dear. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SEA And your replies make me sing and bounce. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
interesting 'write' (I had not seen the original version...) I would like to find some of that 'forbidden tea'...particularly if it allows for forgetting those 'past realities' and playing that game of ecstasy!' Applause!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
secondhanddreampoet That tea was left to me by my great grandfather and he never left me the formula. LOL Thanks for the read. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
"And I become a phantoms wile And be a Buda with a smile Surrounded by impressions spill The glories of a fancy will I make a Shangri-la for two A spirited I and ghost of you We fly about as butterflies Under an emeralds golden sky Drink a draught of forbidden tea With out a thought of what will be" ____________________________________ Sure sounds like two soulmates to me!.....Delightful, bubbly and beautiful thoughts here......Good to read you again Sy Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
glad I had a bit of time to read you I've been missing my Sy time |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Honeybee Love your relpy. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, And I missed you.  |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Sir, this is beautiful one and it has wonderful imagination. I have read several times but did not post because i was fighting with those "Rebel"s back there in the local. love to read your poem as always have a wonderful morning and a great weekend!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Drauntz A large thanks for your sincere replies. |
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