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A Beautiful Disaster Member
since 2007-01-13
Posts 409 |
Heartbreaking On the shards of a dream The fire of love won't burn. Now it hurts me to breathe, But some day it will be your turn. There is no more space In my heart for the empty lies, Our song is erased- All that's left is my last goodbye. No more I will cry, You're not worthy of all my tears. I've lost all but my pride, It won't hurt me again, you hear? For all good that I've done You reject me, and that's heartbreaking. I thought you were the one, Now I see - I was so mistaken! Why did I care so much? Three only words you fear can be the answer; And now I'm out of touch - My heart is wrecked by this love disaster. Now I'm gone, Better alone, The reason is just three words - I AM HURT! But it won't last for long, I have to be happy without you - That will be the revenge. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
felt your pain, Disaster. it is sad, sad song. good poem with true emotions. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hurts to be rejected...James |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
another slice of 'everyperson' life dejavu!... [containing many truths and much 'food for contemplation] powerfully emotive 'write'! Applause!! |
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Patryck Junior Member
since 2007-06-15
Posts 11 |
thats so sad, everyone goes through that kind of pain in their life. keep that positive attitude though, you will be happy without him in time. good luck darl'n. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I don't respond much anymore in the poetry forums...but I always wanted to stop by and tell you I love your username.. the poetry is nice too.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
You write your heart well here, it does hurt as you so rightly say, and again the revenge will be that you are getting along fine without them and that it is their loss.They lost someone who could always love them, their torment will be in never having that again..thank you for the words.. Goldenrose. Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson |
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