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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2007-06-14 12:42 PM






it still surprises me
catches me off guard
that feeling, there
in my heart….

when we speak to each other
in those precious
I’ve known you forever
non verbal ways

be it a touch,
a knowing smirk
or a slant of eyes

it never fails
to take my breath away
this way that you know me
like no other

and it never, ever fails
this bond between us
our love is
what forever means.


~SEA~



© Copyright 2007 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
the concrete rose
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1 posted 2007-06-14 12:49 PM


The silent moans of lust and love owned
by two people who seem truly happy.

A personal favorate now. I liked this one because you don't often read description about a few looks and smirks.
Cheers.

aziza
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2 posted 2007-06-14 01:21 AM


SEA

This is so lovely -- almost quiet in its beauty.  

A

HopeS
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3 posted 2007-06-14 01:38 AM


body langauge can say so much


Hope

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4 posted 2007-06-14 06:53 AM


suesea, forever and since before it seems
endless enjoyable..kewl stuff ms

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5 posted 2007-06-14 08:57 AM


A gentle beauty, SEA.  Much enjoyed.
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6 posted 2007-06-14 11:51 AM


good read
Drauntz
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7 posted 2007-06-14 01:16 PM


beautiful poem and a picture

enjoyed

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2007-06-14 02:14 PM


Softly beautifully written Susan~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2007-06-14 02:45 PM


Nice...James
Pilgrimage
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10 posted 2007-06-14 03:53 PM


Oh yeah.  It's the glance, a raised eyebrow, a half-way smile, that makes you feel close, together.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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11 posted 2007-06-14 06:25 PM


always beautiful


Kit McCallum
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12 posted 2007-06-14 06:27 PM


Beautiful sentiments, Susan ... there's nothing like those stolen glances that set your heart racing. Wonderfully captured, much enjoyed!

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

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13 posted 2007-06-14 07:17 PM


Beautifully written, Susan. As always!
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14 posted 2007-06-15 09:52 AM


Very nice...have enjoyed reading this
many times.  ~K

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15 posted 2007-06-15 11:22 AM


SEA~

Such sensually sensational SEA*sighs*
on this Friday morning ...
Your thoughts touched my heart
in a moment of remember
that, quite without warning,
sent me tumbling back to
a time of such precious recall~

Thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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MIcountrygirl79
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16 posted 2007-06-15 01:33 PM


Beautiful!  I'm definitely feeling it.  As much as I enjoy "pretty words", sometimes it's the non-verbal communications between two people that really resonate!

Elizabeth

aziza
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17 posted 2007-06-15 03:10 PM


This is lovely, SEA.  
Just lovely.

A

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18 posted 2007-06-15 03:45 PM


Coolness...
Honeybee
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19 posted 2007-06-15 09:07 PM



*sighs again*

Beautiful!  Yes, this is what it means to be soulmates

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

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with you
20 posted 2007-06-16 10:25 AM


thank you, each of you, for the read and the sweet replies.
rwood
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21 posted 2007-06-18 12:07 PM


you know,

I don't know what forever is, yet. But this is wonderfully inspiring for me.

Would also be a great submission to a greeting company.

Love,
reg

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22 posted 2007-06-18 06:48 PM


Oh how beautiful this piece is...so soft and loving it makes my eyes go soft just reading it. Lovely write
Ruth

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23 posted 2007-06-18 11:36 PM


Wow, Susan, this is so sexy and beautiful!!
I loved it, of course. Yes, this does sound like
a "forever" kind to me.

So good reading you again, Lady.
Hugs,
Ethel

VBallNut
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24 posted 2007-06-19 02:47 PM


Oh, I know how this feels - I've got one of those relationships, too.  The best things are often those unspoken!  Wonderful!
Moonkist
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25 posted 2007-06-19 07:45 PM


I'm still in my honeymoon phase
And I love my husband oh so dearly
Your poem reminds me
How Love should last
... So beautiful ...

Freedom Now

secondhanddreampoet
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26 posted 2007-06-20 07:18 PM


apparently (and most unfortunately) I missed this 'write' (until now)...

absolutely superb!!

a 'standing ovation' for this poem!

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