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the concrete rose
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0 posted 2007-06-14 12:13 PM


Now, this isn't a very lovely poem like the one I posted before. It's one I wrote not too long ago. Thought it would make an interesting talk. Ad now

for your viewing pleasure
Step right up.


STEP RIGHT UP STEP RIGHT UP
Hurray Hurray Hurray!
Ladies and Gentlemen, have I got the
SHOW OF THE CENTURY
just for you!!

Our carnivale Extrodinaire is here to shock
and amaze with the wide eyed wonder of the
unimaginable, quite tangible
SUPER SCARY REALITY!

In this co-o-o-o-orner!
We have The 3 job woman
also known as Motherum Stressedis
Who suffers from 2 KID SYNDROME
and lives on her very own!
Behold the text book stack of federal notice
and the crows under visual luggage due to
Loss of sleep from her young ones and
tired of roaming for a stable mate
and stable cotton greens
Hide your wallets Good sirs, they come
from areas where crime is common!!

ALSO

We have perched w-w-w-way over here!!
A group of rabid and hungry children.
ALSO known as Starivca malnourishum.
800 of this dwindling population
DIE EVERY HOUR!
It's amazing we've been able to keep them alive
for so long!
Notice the abnormally large stomaches
and sucked in jawlines.
NUH UH UH!!
Please don't feed them!( Our managers up in the White Suite and Oval meeting rooms don't. )


THE SHOW GOES ON LADIES AND GENTLEMEN!!

Behold!... With your very eyes..
.. The Dreaded Junkie!
Also called desire-in Overhwelmas
Yessir, every family has one
they make for GREAT stories
This one suffers from Heroinitis,
a disease of the mind caused from
abundant consumption of their favorate meal
THE COCOA BEAN, which also makes chocolate! ( Yummeh' )
Take a gander to the shivering posture
and often angry and unexpecting behavior.
Not to close to the cage! If you let one
pinch you you become one of them! and the coca bean is
easy to get in the Concrete Jungles of NY.

Not frightened yet!?!?!

Then allow me to present to you..
the weeping childless woman!!
Also called Tearsarefrom Gunninga
This depressing and unfortunate species
Lost her child in the desert from a Death March
issued by her tribal elders
ORIGINALLY they are happy but confused of the
cubs desicions. And that is when the Olive branch
warriors confirm his death and tell her.
BEFORE YOUR EYES SHE FINALLY SNAPS!
Be careful not to talk to to her, for she may cry from
being reminded of her son in any way!


Well Now Ladies and Gentlemen
The tour is now UP! for now.
More attractions will come soon
Such as an actual breed of people
who hate different kinds of people!!
Or a species that fends for itself
from birth!( The parents typically die the first
few years from natural causes like Metal and
Gunpowder.)
AND FOR THIS MONTH ONLY!
We'll present you with a leader
of the INFAMOUS
Haliburton tribe! Be careful though, he's a
real " Dick " with a sporatic trigger finger.

Good Day to you!


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1 posted 2007-06-14 12:53 PM


that last part made me laugh...the tongue in cheek is great

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