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Open Poetry #40
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2007-06-13 07:59 PM

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Knee deep—yet two women

Wave good day to passersby
With their colored sleeves


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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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1 posted 2007-06-13 10:18 PM

what are they doing? not in rice field,right? too deep. They must be doing their laundry.
aziza
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2 posted 2007-06-14 11:15 PM

Lovely poetry, wonderful Poet Man.

Thank you.
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