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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

0 posted 2007-06-13 03:58 PM



Oh, my love
How long I have to wait?
Thunder lost his voice
Summer lost her weight
You, with my heart,
swim in  fins


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WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218

1 posted 2007-06-19 08:47 PM


This is really good!!!!!!!!
jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
2 posted 2007-06-19 11:10 PM


Chuckling here....if nothing else (which it certainly is) it's to the pointe, pointed..."nuff said and such!"

In short ... loved it!

j.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2007-06-20 04:42 AM


goodie another keeper for my library!

how'd I miss this one?

glad I saw it now!

paullallady
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since 2007-04-03
Posts 262
Michigan
4 posted 2007-06-20 01:20 PM


I love reading your poetry, and this is another example of your talent.
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2007-06-20 01:26 PM


These little poetic treats are as precious as you are!

Warm, loving hug,
EA

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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South Africa
6 posted 2007-06-20 03:52 PM


  Enjoyed the read!  
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