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Open Poetry #40

Global Warming (tanka)

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2007-06-12 11:20 PM

Global Warming
[Nights of Violence!]

Spectral clouds clashing
licked by liquid-fire tongues,
Thunder shakes the moon
above the withering hills,
teasing ‘heat-demon’ laughter!
~

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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with you

1 posted 2007-06-13 12:00 PM

"Thunder shakes the moon"

I really liked that line...very intense

paullallady
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since 2007-04-03

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Michigan

2 posted 2007-06-13 07:10 AM

wow, this is powerful with such vivid imagery,,terrific poem.

ArtSolstice
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since 2007-03-18

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3 posted 2007-06-13 08:59 AM

Oh, well done, Poet!

aziza
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since 2006-07-09

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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!

4 posted 2007-06-14 03:24 AM

You know, Bruce, sometimes you render me speechless. This is one of those times -- magnificant work.

I truly am in awe.

A

the concrete rose
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since 2006-08-01

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5 posted 2007-06-14 03:28 AM

Whew, this work of art is definately on fire with the message man.

Liquid-Fire Tongues is probably my favorate little chunk of the poem.

A great read, as always.
Cheers.

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