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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas 
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You encroach upon my thoughts confident and unashamed of the territory you claim. What else can I do but surrender to you? "You inspire; I desire – and refrain; you sustain." |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
beautiful poem. truly. and very manly. enjoyed |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh I like this very much!  |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
Lovely. A |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh WOW, now this, I like very much!! Nice to see you posting again. Much enjoyed your words today. As far as a critique for this? Nah.. it's perfect just the way it is!  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you can say that again  |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Short and to the point, but still with enough in there to create an atmosphere.Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! I like it! glad you are back around here |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is very good. I like it alot. |
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Winter Butterfly Member
since 2007-02-03
Posts 61The hidden path beyond the ivy gate. |
It's perfect in it's simplicity. Alive with the power of it's truth. "The only way to learn to fly is to spread your wings and jump." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
What else could you do indeed? Lovely poem full of depth despite its shortness a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
WOW! Passion...Passion..PASSION! |
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