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MindBodySoul
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0 posted 2007-06-11 01:19 AM


Loyal forever, was the catch
Pessimistic was my smile
Your net was simple words
All that a girl wanted to hear
But along the game, something changed
Feeling grew, dreams evolved
A slight sign of hope for a better tomorrow
Heart was healed, ready to give
And you came in ready to steal

Swiftly my heart was stolen
We are forever enslaved
By our uniqueness
Turning back is not a choice
Giving up is not an option
It is one of those true things
For better or for worse
By each others side we will stand
It is the true meaning of a best friend
A true lover… and a real heart




Jen--->MindBodySoul

[This message has been edited by MindBodySoul (06-11-2007 05:09 PM).]

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Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
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1 posted 2007-06-11 12:27 PM


Jen , another beautiful one and romantic.

good.

enjoyed

passing shadows
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2 posted 2007-06-11 06:07 PM


very romantic! I love this!
secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2007-06-11 06:41 PM


Powerful and emotive ‘write’!

grand line: “We are forever enslaved
                   By our uniqueness…”

applause!!

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