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Sunshine
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0 posted 2007-06-10 10:31 PM




SummerSized





Summer sounds of katydids and bees
Sighing a summer’s breeze through the pines
A butterfly lights, a model for me
Summer sounds of katydids and bees
I sink to the ground to kneel on my knees
To know that this moment is briefly mine
Summer sounds of katydids and bees
Sighing a summer’s breeze through the pines




© Copyright 2007 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
aziza
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1 posted 2007-06-10 10:40 PM


Lovely poetry
from a lovely lady.

Thank you for being a source of inspiration.

Alison

Drauntz
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2 posted 2007-06-11 12:05 PM


very lovely style and beautiful.


enjoyed

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2007-06-11 03:10 AM


Enjoyed...James
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4 posted 2007-06-11 09:17 AM


wow- beautiful!
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5 posted 2007-06-11 09:35 AM


Loved this, so peaceful, colorful and alive with a freshness....
passing shadows
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6 posted 2007-06-11 06:47 PM


I love this!

very hopeful feeling I get

secondhanddreampoet
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7 posted 2007-06-11 08:55 PM


most pleasant 'photo-image' and poetic imagery!

sustained applause!!

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8 posted 2007-06-12 01:11 AM


  Love it, SIL!!
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9 posted 2007-06-12 11:23 PM



summer's song is lilting
when sung with your pen
Karilea...

and the butterfly...

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10 posted 2007-06-13 12:36 PM


Most Triolets I've seen are thin and empty, virtually greeting card verse....this on the other hand is very much a, um, flush Triolet!




....slightly sorry (but only slightly!)....dyslexia will do that to ya.....

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Kit McCallum
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11 posted 2007-06-13 06:37 AM


Beautiful Karilea ... wonderful form and wonderful visuals. Very much enjoyed.

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

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12 posted 2007-06-13 07:05 AM


ms sun, you do some amazing things

with words

enjoyed you ms

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13 posted 2007-06-14 07:31 PM


You do these triolets very well.
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