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Broken_Inside
New Member
since 2007-05-06
Posts 4
Texas

0 posted 2007-06-10 09:12 PM


Why even try
when you don't really care
I see you all the time with her
Running your fingers through her hair

It hurts me so much
To know your not near
I only wish to hold you close
So you can take away all my fears

You were the one
I always thought about
I thought we'd always be
I never had 1 doubt

Until that very day
When you said we were through
I did nothing but cry
To the very thought of you

Your broke this fragile heart of mine
Into little pieces it went
There was nothing I could do
Your message was clear, that I won't forget

I'll never no what its like
To truly love some one
Cuz every time I fall in love
The guy says were through....were done!

I never realized pain until now
I couldn't really noticed
I guess I couldn't grow up enough
Or even learn to focus

But I'll try to to stay strong
And do as I will
No matter how much pain I'm in
Or how much I want to kill

Pain may last forever
And my heart may never mend
I thought we could be to together
But us together had to end!

Me and my bf just broke up after being together for 3 years! I couldn't have been happier when I was with him! And well now I'm so depressed and I can't take it! But I'm not going to let him see that in me! I always thought that when girls say their heart is broken it was just a phrase, but now I really know what they meant!

Alliey R.


© Copyright 2007 Alliey Rosser - All Rights Reserved
Drauntz
Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
1 posted 2007-06-10 11:42 PM


Beautiful. very good.


enjoyed

welcome to the wonderful place of PIP

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2007-06-11 06:30 AM


Alliey... I know you're hurting now and my heart goes out to you sweet friend... this was a good write of your emotions.. writing does help ... we in these blue pages are here to offer support and kindness along the way - be strong and you will see the sun shine again soon...

Sending some of my very special hugs just for you

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2007-06-11 06:45 PM


time does heal all wounds, I will tell you, though it might not seem like it now


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