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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Potions There is a potion that I dip And a notion that I sip That spirits me to fields of seem A microcosm and a dream An entrance way into a state An alchemy and change of fate A kingdom where I rein in rule Where some might say I play the fool Blowing bobbles in the air Bobbles I would never dare Flowers of my fantasy A bloom that odors ecstasy Forgive me, it is not a crime To let ones mind to touch sublime To ride a magic carpets fly And thread a needles waiting eye Grab the thread and hold on tight And watch for tunnels of delight |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
This is most lovely I'll carry it with me and savor the words and message. A |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Well, I'll put my hand out and gladly grab onto that thread Sy. Wonderful write, with phrasing to delight as always!  Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
"Grab the thread and hold on tight And watch for tunnels of delight" Thanks for showing me the way! N. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
sir, this is so wonderful. you have brought your poem back to youth. very beautiful. just wonderful Have a wonderful morning, Sir Tabin. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
By now, Sy, you know what I think of your precious words... and this is another     |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
aziza Your coments are a delight. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Neeraja Thank you sweetie. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Drauntz Your replies are always a pleasure to read. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Yes I do love. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
An entrance way into a state An alchemy and change of fate A kingdom where I rein in rule Where some might say I play the fool it's nice to be in love and play your own tunes...without someone changing the channel.... hugs |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ You are so right. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
a wonderful kingdom Sir Sy... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady Thank you my dear. |
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