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Jenna
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0 posted 06-10-2007 01:37 PM       View Profile for Jenna   Email Jenna   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Jenna

Let me go
your heart does not need me anymore
who are you trying to fool?
I will relieve you of your duties
you are free to go
back to the place where your heart now resides.
Free my heart from yours
untangle it now
and cut the ties.
Remove all thoughts of me from your mind
I am blocking you out too.
Leave and dont look back
chase the shadows from our past away
and move on.
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JamesMichael
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1 posted 06-10-2007 06:05 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Usually a period of extreme frustration and disappointments lead one to this not so easy choice...James
Drauntz
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2 posted 06-10-2007 06:34 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

oh, this is very sad poem but very practical.

many thing grows out of  love.


enjoyed as always
Aimster
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3 posted 09-26-2007 05:47 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Easier said then done...sometimes things are not what they seem.

Nice write!

"Life is not measured by the breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away"

 
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