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RogueandPoet
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since 2007-06-04
Posts 126
Oregon

0 posted 2007-06-10 01:33 PM


Driving our Anniversary


There’s no doubt
    around the corners,
    we’ve a stable suspension
    and good tires.


In heavy traffic
    we maneuver easily
    around delays and
    always find our way.


On long trips we
    have good economy
    and enough power to
    keep pushing ahead.


We’ve been driving together
    for twelve years now -
    a good marriage
    on the road of life.


© Copyright 2007 John Eyler - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
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1 posted 2007-06-10 01:36 PM


What a beautiful comparison, RoguandPoet. Wonderful analogy and nicely phrased. Much enjoyed.

Welcome to Passions!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-06-12 01:53 PM


wow, beautiful.

very good. and the poem talks on its own.


enjoyed

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2007-06-13 06:32 AM


Nice...James
aziza
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since 2006-07-09
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
4 posted 2007-06-14 11:27 PM


Good writing - I hope your marriage gets good gas mileage and you always have tread on your tires.

A

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