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howardtsu
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0 posted 2007-06-09 03:12 PM




                    Eve turned on the lamp

her eyes were still damp

she couldn't believe the words written under the stamp

Howard really was her heavyweight champ

she thought Evander Holyfield was just kidding when he told her that Howard was getting back in the ring

                     to fight for their fling

all he had to to was give her telephone a ring

                  to become her wild thing

she was ready to swing

but then how was he supposed to know her hot springs

                         were available



                                                                                love,

                                                                                eve



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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2007-06-09 03:49 PM


Enjoyed...James
howardtsu
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2 posted 2007-06-21 01:03 PM


thanks james  
Angel4aKing
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3 posted 2007-06-23 12:00 PM


I've been gone to long!! What did I miss in this saga of love???

~~~kingsangel~~~

SmartChick
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4 posted 2007-06-23 12:06 PM


Beautiful!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2007-06-24 02:33 AM


I've missed some dialogue too... but it seems like Eve is still making up her mind Howard?  yes/no?     love it either way! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

howardtsu
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6 posted 2007-06-24 03:56 PM


hi angel4aking

we've only been kissing

but we've been missing

your comments


thanks smartchick & roniece  

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