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Tim
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since 1999-06-08
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0 posted 2007-06-07 01:52 PM


If there is any ambiguity
Claims of my perspicuity
Are false I fear
Or so I hear
In fact it is verbosity
Along with speech velocity
For which I'm known
Some people groan
When without a hint of reticence
I display my verbal eloquence
I start to talk
Then people walk
Away quite fast without a hesitance
In their gait, with nary a chance
To say goodbye
I know not why?
It might be I am too erudite,
For simple folk, I am not contrite,
I shan't stay mum
Because they're dumb
I do not intend to be gratuitous,
But perhaps it is a bit fortuitous,
They had their chance
So good riddance
My speech for folk may be too grandiose,
So I guess it is time now to say to all adios
Quite simply I say,
Farewell and good day.

© Copyright 2007 Tim - All Rights Reserved
Winter Butterfly
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since 2007-02-03
Posts 61
The hidden path beyond the ivy gate.
1 posted 2007-06-07 06:49 PM


Very Nice!

This reminds of everyone I work with who complain I use too many big words. My vocabulary is what it is and I enjoy varied topics of conversation. I won't dumb myself down for them.

"The only way to learn to fly is to spread your wings and jump."

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2007-06-11 08:14 AM




I'm often wrought by such a figure
that would stay my words such as this
So I turn my back, offering a cold shiver
and nary glance back to leave a kiss...



You just be yourself, sir...
for that we might get the best of you here.




Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
3 posted 2007-06-12 02:20 PM


very nice. yep ,not need to hide, like it or not.

enjoyed.

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