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SimplyGold
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since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453


0 posted 2007-06-07 11:20 AM


watching you
  come the morning
cheeks flush
  from forbidden dreams
to touch you
  awakens desire
bending time
  wanting you
I surrender
  to your grace
Remembering your words
  "it only gets better"..

SimplyGold

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2007-06-07 08:17 PM


A happy song, sings sweetly on you.
Glad to read you again.
TD

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2007-06-07 08:40 PM


nice one
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2007-06-08 10:04 AM


SG, it appears that all is well with you in the love department! ~ and you deserve it!

And yes, may it "only get better"! Your poem has put a smile on my face for your happiness!

So good to be reading your poetry again!

Loving hug,
EA

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