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Open Poetry #40
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Triskaidekaphobia
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since 2003-02-05
Posts 251
In a state of disrepair...
0 posted 2007-06-07 10:10 AM


We breathe a lonely feeling
and speak without meaning

I don't know why I....
won't laugh or cry

The pretty people die
instead of live the lie

I don't know why I...
drown in dead eyes

So fill me with hurt and broken rhyme
the punishment the same as the crime

All the empty people
dreaming that they're equal
just breeding for a sequel
to their little lies.

I don't know why I....
try.

Hangovers are nature's way of preparing us for liver failure.
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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2007-06-07 09:07 PM

sad stuff here...I relate

nice ending to this
Drauntz
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since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905
Los Angeles California
2 posted 2007-06-08 01:43 AM

another quite a way of life. another gloomy life. the feeling of lost is well said.


enjoyed
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